most of your deviations were similar so ill just roun it up in this...You got potential and an eye for angles.Alsı it is evident that ou got a good camera(what is it by the way?)
BUT...most of them are too hazy and too momentous...you might wanna capture spcieal moments, work on your obsevation...
i said that you have an eye for ngles, but you need to develop it further...The angles you got are good but you could have used the frame more effectively...
you gotta start takin' more sophisticated pictures...For example if youre shooting in darkness..ie that basement...make use of the lower light settings on the canera...and DO make use of the ''B'' mode(in which the camera allows in light as long as you keep pressing the button...It'll take a coupla trial and error sorta ruined films, but when you get it it right it is KING
i cant think of anything else for now...i hope this was useful, mate